Very nice. I love the ending! I have a magnetic poetry languishing somewhere. Alas, we are still in the age of fridge magnets and magnetic letters and all the school papers. Some day, though. Some day...
Mine languished in an envelope my entire time at the previous apartment, but now I decided to get them out. They're mostly for myself, but it's interesting to see what the kids do with them.
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Date: 2012-01-27 03:16 am (UTC)It's supposed to come through as a heart! I love your poem!
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